Only Moments

Remembering dim rooms
hushed conversation
whispering those compliments
almost embarrassed
trying to communicate the reverence
the pure weight of all this feeling
wading so deep in love

They’re only moments…

Remembering falling rain
buried in each other’s coats
kisses through smiles
desire whilst laughing
being perfectly overwhelmed by someone
the greatness that is all-consuming
swallowed so deeply in love

They’re only moments
so missed, so missing

Today is bright, today is dry
but to feel again that feeling
to feel again
the deepest drowning of love
the greatest feeling

Those moments
only moments
so missed, so missing from my life…

23 thoughts on “Only Moments

    1. Thank you Ivor. So nice to see a comment from you. I sure meant this one when I wrote it. Those moments (and they’re only moments) are like gold dust. Don’t let them go unrecorded or under appreciated.

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      1. Ah thank you so much Susi, I’m so pleased it worked for you. 🙂 The reblogging is very kind of you. I’m looking forward to reading more of you work too.

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    1. Thank you so much. Absolutely have to hang onto those memories and keep them alive. Trap them in a poem if you can 🙂 Really glad you enjoyed.


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